My first single, any feedback?

We are the music makers and this is our music. This subreddit is dedicated to the musical artists that inhabit reddit. It is used to showcase new, in progress, or old pieces of music. It can also allow for the critique of your full song's work in progress. We are not genre specific and welcome all styles of music. We have a VERY STRICT spam policy. PLEASE READ THE RULES BEFORE POSTING.

Need Feedback for my first song🙇🏻‍♂️

We are the music makers and this is our music. This subreddit is dedicated to the musical artists that inhabit reddit. It is used to showcase new, in progress, or old pieces of music. It can also allow for the critique of your full song's work in progress. We are not genre specific and welcome all styles of music. We have a VERY STRICT spam policy. PLEASE READ THE RULES BEFORE POSTING.

Rap in Schweizerdeutsch?

Musik aus dem deutschsprachigen Raum bzw. von deutschsprachigen Künstlern. Und alles drum herum. Ehemals /r/germusic